This is a very interesting article because until this very morning I've resisted audio books - I listened to a portion of a short story on a podcast - I'm not sure it's my medium but I like that you are able to incorporate elements of the story with your environment - the absence of bees in the story with you standing under a tree. I just started following you. I hope you will follow me - I will soon have my next article published here in the Writing Cooperative about how writing a big outline can kill your book - it's a humor self help article I hope you will enjoy.