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FICTION WRITING AND STORYTELLING

Fix Your Dull Writing with a Powerful Inciting Incident

Start Strong ➡️Finish Strong

2 min readMar 20, 2025

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A woman is happily writing in a journal — trees and flowers in the background
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An inciting incident is the narrative’s first significant event, and this scene is a force that drives the ripple effect defined as — the many consequences triggered by the inciting incident.

A Real-Life Inciting Incident

To better understand a story’s inciting incident and its ripple effect, let’s consider a real-life example:

Do you ever think about a past event and wonder where or who you would be today if it hadn’t happened?

Let’s suppose that today you’re married and live on a farm in Montana. What if twelve years ago you were sick with flu and you couldn’t go to your friend’s housewarming party where you met your spouse?

🤔Would you be single today or would you be with someone else?

🤔Would you live in Montana where you both moved to raise chickens and breed horses or would you still live in your home state in a small house?

🤔Would you hold the beliefs you and your spouse share today?

🤔Would you look the same as you do now?

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